Tuesday, 13 April 2010

Chapter 1 done

Well I've just completed the changes to chapter 1 of BTL and I have sent the old and the new versions to my friend Jan to get her opinion. I'm going to be really interested in what she has to say.
It still needs a polish but I want to get a feel for if I'm on the right track.
To say that they are telling the same story they are two very different animals.

3 comments:

Suzanne Jones said...

It's good to get the opinion of someone you trust with these things.

Well done for getting the changes to chapter one under your belt.

XX

LilyS said...

Goog luck with the chapter. I have just revisited the novel tonight and its a very daunting task

Colette McCormick said...

Thanks Suzanne - Jan is my oldest friend so I know I can trust her.
Good luck with that Cheryl (or should I call you Lily?) it is daunting.