Hope you enjoy.
On the Bridge at
Dawn
By
In her younger days Marion
could have hopped on top of the wall at the bridge’s edge with one leap. But
that was many years and several stones ago. Now she would need help.
She looked at the wooden box in her
hand. She placed it on the floor with deliberation. She knew that it would take
her weight. She had tested it last night.
Slowly she climbed on to it.
Damn, she was still too low. She
had underestimated the height of the wall.
Her mind raced frantically,
desperate to come up with a solution. She had come so far, too far to go back.
She forced the knee on to the top
of the wall and looked around for something to pull herself up with. There was
nothing.
She put the palms of her hands on
the wall and tried to push off from the leg that still stood on the box. Could
she support her weight? She would have to.
But she could not.
Wrists weak from arthritis gave way
under her bulk, her weight dropping back on to her standing leg. The box
underneath that leg slipped under the unusual pressure.
As the leg crumpled she fell
backwards and in the split second that it took for her to fall to the floor she
noticed with extreme clarity the beauty of the dawn sky. And after the bang of
the head on the cobbles came the darkness.
And after that?
Nothing.
6 comments:
Brilliant! I loved it. Can't you send it off somewhere?
What about 'Cafelit.com'?
Glad you enjoyed it Paula. I haven't sent it anywhere because I thought the market for this length of thing was pretty much dead but I'll give cafelit.com a look. Thanks.
It's great to read a piece of your work, Colette.
Thanks Debbie - hope you enjoyed it.
I think Paula's right - you should send it off somewhere! Lots packed into few words - could you enter it in a competition? x
That's not a bad idea Teresa - I'll look into it. Thanks for your kind words.
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